Sunday, January 22, 2012

Nativity

I'm not quite happy with this one, it needs something else...
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2 comments:

Heather said...

It looks great! Perhaps it needs something in the foreground? maybe you could put some silhouettes of shepherds or sheep coming to see the baby Jesus. All you'd see is their backs or maybe a side profile.. Anyways.. I wish I could look at the picture while I leave comments

Heather said...

You could even just crop it a little on the left side.. It looks slightly off balance because baby Jesus isn't quite in the center of the image and the end of Mary's robe on the right causes want of something more on the left side of the image. Either cropping it or adding something in the bottom left corner would balance it. I hope you don't mind my feedback.. It does look great. I only found things to notice because you said you weren't happy with it.